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The Commitee Roadtrip!
“It’s against road trip rules to do it like this, I just want you to know that.” The car door slammed shut as Felicity folded herself into the backseat. “Everybody knows you get candy at the gas-station as you leave town. You don’t start off with candy.” She said sagely, she looked at her backseat neighbor and scowled.
Donna Limber was not thrilled to share the backseat with a super-villain. It felt sort of like a bad idea really. Superman didn’t golf with Lex Luthor. She was also very aware that Felicity didn’t like her much, at all.
“I hate you.” Felicity said, confirming this. Donna had to admit she was a little at fault for the animosity, the first time she saw Felicity she punched her in the face. That said Felicity started it by being paid to beat her up once. So really they were both at fault...but mostly Felicity for being evil.
“You two be nice!” Rachel said from the front seat, looking at the pair in the
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Literature
Tsuchigumo- His Brother's Curse PT2
Razordoll. One of many dozens of clones of a being made only to kill and cause havoc. This exact clone was made by a certain...ex-chief minister of a certain place that nobody knows about. It was designed to lack the whimsy and mirth of the other Razordoll killer models and be a strictly no nonsense strike weapon. You fire it a place and it makes everyone there dead. Then a little button makes it’s head exploded so you don’t have to die getting near it.
The thing is a living blade with finely honed instincts designed to kill. Every action it makes is designed to be as lethal as possible and it’s one goal is to see all organic life die.
Ingrid Blitzkrieg. A multi-millionaire arms trader for mad scientists and strange warriors. She has come in her state of the art Blitz-Blast Tank. It has forty weapons spread across it’s hover chassis, armour thick enough to shrug off a howitzer blast and enough of a range to fire back if they feel like it. She has designed the ve
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Literature
Tsuchigumo- His Brother's Curse Pt1
Once upon a time there was a story that walked like a man, talked like a man and acted like a total bastard. This story walked the world, strutting like a mighty bull unafraid of all challengers and he changed the world to make it how he wanted.
His life was no longer a genre it was real. His life was a horrifying, romantic, tragic, comical, science-fiction cowboy detective novel, with just a splash or pornography. He was everything a story ought to be.
The problem with a successful story though. There will always be imitators.
Hyper Reality Presents
A T.H.E.M. Acknowledged event
Louis Niccals stars in;
Tsuchigumo
“Good things come to an end, bad things have to be stopped.” Kim Newman
---Sophie Thomson
“What's the word on Jane Doe in room four oh two?” Asks Dr Snow as he is handed a series of X-rays by the long haired individual from the radiology department. Dr. Snow is an old warhorse of a man and his pal
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The Committee- Mascots!
Nobody can quite explain where The Committee of Elastic Blondes- now the Clique of Elastic Associates but all their paperwork says the former- actually meets. All of them walk through separate doors and wind up in the same place. There’s lots of excuses for how this can work. One of them is bad architecture, but I’ve yet to meet someone bloody stupid enough to build a freestanding structure across four or five separate dimensions.
Some say this occurs thanks to a complicated magical spell, weaving together various locations through complicated magical ley lines intersped through time and space. Others say it is an act of dark-science, locations linked through a mutation on string theory and the kinetic energy created opening the door creates an Einstein Rosen Bridge between locations.
Nancy has ideas. Nancy says it happens because, quote. “It makes the story easier to tell, so don’t worry about it, it’s all just a show.” She explains lamely. “I
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Literature
HR 2099 Part 2- The Liquid Lifetime Case
“It’s a bit gothic isn’t it?” The woman in the blue overcoat looks at the large statue on the building. A grinning, nasty face propped on the body of a weightlifter. It clings horribly to the side of a building, mouth yawning wide and fangs emerging en masse.
“It’s supposed to.” Grant Ellis replies pouring her a drink. “Gargoyles are nasty looking things. I have it there to remind me that the world is full of such awful lurking creatures.” He doesn’t pour himself a drink, the bottle is placed to one side by a pair of arms that seem to float just behind him. “No matter how lovely the view,” he nodded toward the great expanse of the city outside.
Lights blinding, pavements packed, men and women hurtling through the air at immense speeds in colourful costumes. A litany of bright and beautiful. Then the Gargoyle clinging limpet like to the side of one building staring dead ahead into the office.
“There’s al
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HR-2099 Part 1 The Liquid Lifetime Case
I’ve loved three women in my entire life.

The first was from another planet, my forever dance partner and the only woman I kept chasing after.
The second was a fair haired lady from another universe, she killed wurms for a living - pronounced worm- I had no chance. 
The last one...the last one I kept hurting over and over again hoping one day she’d just leave and find someone better.
It wouldn’t have been hard.
The Memoirs of THE Fictional Man- Louis Niccals Autobiography 

He’s in chains, an IV drains slowly into his wrists as he sits in the room that reeks of cleanliness. They’re trying to get him to talk, even now they think it’s possible to break him. He might be an old dog but lord was he ever inventing new tricks.
A do-gooder walks in. All heavy tromps of solid metal boots, a big steel face looks back at him glowing red eyes surrounded by a dark-hood. A smile on his face, the kind that
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Literature
Tsuchigumo- Never Satisfied
Once upon a time there was a story that walked like a man, talked like a man and acted like a total bastard. This story walked the world, strutting like a mighty bull unafraid of all challengers and he changed the world to make it how he wanted.
His life was no longer a genre it was real. His life was a horrifying, romantic, tragic, comical, science-fiction cowboy detective novel, with just a splash or pornography. He was everything a story ought to be.
The problem with a successful story though. There will always be imitators.
Hyper Reality Presents
A T.H.E.M. Acknowledged event
Louis Niccals stars in;
Tsuchigumo
You’re like me. I’m never satisfied. -Alexander Hamilton
--- Sophie Thomson
You never forget what getting shot in the arm feels like, honestly, you just plain don’t. It’s a sharp sudden intensity followed by a sensation not unlike a bee sting. Something strange and hot and wrong stuck betwe
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Literature
Tsuchigumo-The Hunter in Repose
Once upon a time there was a story that walked like a man, talked like a man and acted like a total bastard. This story walked the world, strutting like a mighty bull unafraid of all challengers and he changed the world to make it how he wanted.
His life was no longer a genre it was real. His life was a horrifying, romantic, tragic, comical, science-fiction cowboy detective novel, with just a splash or pornography. He was everything a story ought to be.
The problem with a successful story though. There will always be imitators.


Hyper Reality Presents
A T.H.E.M. Acknowledged event
Louis Niccals stars in;
Tsuchigumo
He no longer has to worry about being the baddest motherfucker in the world. The position is taken. - Snow Crash
--- Sophie Thomson
There’s a bullet on the ground and the sound of wheels across the sand. Gulls scream overhead and the waves hiss gently as The Hand of Jack makes his way toward
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Literature
Ser Seregal (COM)
The village was a writhing mass of darkness. When the demon had struck the town was not prepared, they were not ready and so all but the fastest runners and the surest of swords had fallen. The villagers pooled their wealth, made estimates on what was left in the village and then sent messages to the four corners for aid.
First came the mad and desperate, adventurers in ruined old leathers and so sure of their fated greatness. They fell like a house of cards in a tornado. Then came those who knew what they were doing, vetrans of a hundred dives into the dungeons dark. Heroes of places spoken of in legend. As one they admitted that they could not be paid enough to walk into that hellish place.
Hope seemed lost when the church simply advised they “Would pray for them”. The villagers watched as the darkness crawled and consumed their homes. Then he came.
He came with the dawn a mountain of a man decked out in armour that gleamed no matter the light. Villagers spoke in hushed w
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Literature
Tsuchigumo - His Brother's Protector
Once upon a time there was a story that walked like a man, talked like a man and acted like a total bastard. This story walked the world, strutting like a mighty bull unafraid of all challengers and he changed the world to make it how he wanted.
His life was no longer a genre it was real. His life was a horrifying, romantic, tragic, comical, science-fiction cowboy detective novel, with just a splash or pornography. He was everything a story ought to be.
The problem with a successful story though. There will always be imitators.
Hyper Reality Presents
A T.H.E.M. Acknowledged event
Louis Niccals stars in;
Tsuchigumo
Aren't you just doing this because you want a little spice in your boring lives?” The Killer, Persona 4
---Sophie Thomson
Sophie tells herself it’s a fluke the first shot missed. When the second shot also misses she realizes that this won’t be as simple as shooting a regular blind person.
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Literature
Of Suits and Snakes (COM)
The jets of the jacuzzi let out a purr as Felicity sank into the tub. She let her arms braced over the sides as she just let herself go and relax. She deserved this, she’d earned this. Weeks of boring articles, subpar eateries and that whole clone debacle.
She’d earned a little five star pampering at the Montclam. If you were of the wealthy hotel hopping elite, The Montclam was the pearl of London. Top to bottom fixings and furnishings. A staff lovingly told to lick the boot and scrape the heel as much as possible.
This led to a lot of lovely food and a hotel suite twice the size of her own flat. Felicity was in heaven. She tugged on the strings of her Naheka-Brand Union Jack bikini. The weather never really allowed her to wear it, England has perhaps a DAY of sun every seven years. Besides there was another reason to wear it.
The door to the bathroom opened, that’s right private jacuzzi’s in the bathroom what a luxury. In walked one Kana Naheka in her own strik
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Literature
Valeska and Felicity Villains for Hire
“I don’t know, I kind of feel like that’s contractual entrapment.” Valeska looked over the contract she’d been handed. “Like are these timed enhancements or are they permanent?” Valeska looked at the snarled slab of a person in front of her.
His face was hanging off in some places and pretty much just ragged flaps in others. Half of his mouth erupted out of one corner of his face in an explosion of teeth and bloody gums. He was in a perpetual slump thanks to one half of his body stretching to an impossible height, most notably his bizarre bladed arm. A single eye blinked at Valeska from his bicep and she had to do her best not to look nauseous.
“Zhay are nawt tempo-rary.” He managed to say around his ruined fangs. “Zhese emprovements will ehnable yew to be a more pohwaful force of destruction.” Dr Mutanstein said pointing to Valeska. “Awl my creachures have to be enhanced.” He said drumming his
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Literature
It's Tradition
April 1st was special. It was Louis Niccals’ birthday and he liked to spoil himself. He’d rented out The Second Best Sin, a lovely new place he’d been hearing raved about. Rented it out for the Niccals party. All expenses paid at the end of the day.
“Table for the Niccals party,” Louis spoke to the head of the house, “booked it a while ago.” He flashed the girl a grin. She looked at him and then looked at her records book, scanning for his surname.
“A late arrival?” She asked him. His face scrunched up some. “The party has already been here for a while.”
“Without the birthday boy?” Louis asked, his frown quickly scattered away. “Oh it’s a surprise thing! Oh you silly bint you’ve ruined it all.” He snapped at the girl behind the counter. “I’m going to have to pretend to be shocked now.”
Wouldn’t be hard he didn’t expect anyone to come to his birthday after
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Literature
Tsuchigumo- Let's go out tonight
Once upon a time there was a story that walked like a man, talked like a man and acted like a total bastard. This story walked the world, strutting like a mighty bull unafraid of all challengers and he changed the world to make it how he wanted.
His life was no longer a genre it was real. His life was a horrifying, romantic, tragic, comical, science-fiction cowboy detective novel, with just a splash or pornography. He was everything a story ought to be.
The problem with a successful story though. There will always be imitators.
Hyper Reality Presents
A T.H.E.M. Acknowledged event
Louis Niccals stars in;

Tsuchigumo
“Just the bitch of living.As someone you can't stand.”-Spring Awakening, all male chorus
---Sophie Thomson
“I know why you’re here.” The young man on the bicycle tells his passenger. Sophie sits on the back of the bicycle, a parcel under one arm and the other arm holding her steady on the b
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Literature
The Comittee 2- It's Donna Be Fun
Nancy flicked through the sheet letters of recommendations and pursed her lips. “Hmm, you think a streak counts?” She asked Felicity who was flicking through a book. She paused, shrugged her shoulders and peered over the top.
“A streak?” She asked Nancy, dog earing the page she was on. “Like what do you mean a streak?” She put the book to one side and Nancy’s upper half shot across the room on an undulating torso. She was holding a set of photographs.
“Member farming.” She said and handed them to Felicity. “Check her out,” she said handing over one photograph. Felicity had to whistle. Some bombshell wrapped in purple, nice classic mask.
Felicity nodded. “She’s bloody gorgeous,” she said frankly, “I gotta know who her suit designer is. So I can hold them ransom for my own work.” She looked up and noticed the look Nancy was giving her. Judgement passed but Nancy said nothing. “Oh please
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Literature
Tsuchigumo- The Weapon checks in
Once upon a time there was a story that walked like a man, talked like a man and acted like a total bastard. This story walked the world, strutting like a mighty bull unafraid of all challengers and he changed the world to make it how he wanted.
His life was no longer a genre it was real. His life was a horrifying, romantic, tragic, comical, science-fiction cowboy detective novel, with just a splash or pornography. He was everything a story ought to be.
The problem with a successful story though. There will always be imitators.


Hyper Reality Presents
A T.H.E.M. Acknowledged event
Louis Niccals stars in;
Tsuchigumo
“Think of Batman as a great role, like a Hamlet, or Willie Loman … or even James Bond. And play it to suit your strengths.”-Alfred Pennyworth
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Sophie Thomson
“It’s an appealing thought but I hope you’re not entertaining it too seriousl
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Critiques


First off when it comes to power-suit designs I adore the bigger and bulkier versions. Tony Stark and his slim-line stuff can get out o...

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Hey I wanted to read all three parts before leaving a comment- in case a worry I had in one part was picked up in another- I have to sa...

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Foremost I have to say I can see what you wanted to do and that it comes across as a pretty nice picture. But it's one of these things ...


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A writer-man who has a bad habit of mixing his fact and his fictions. Let's his ideas get ahead of him but still attempts to make work consistent and enjoyable. I mostly write Super-Heroes, Government Conspiracies and FactXFiction is my OTP forever.

FAQ-

What's under the bandages?
Skin.

Are you open for Trades?
YES, always. I just don't accept them all.

Are you open for Commissions?
Yes, I've yet to refuse one.

Do you do requests?
Not always but I usually have UNIQUE journals that let people get free stories.

Where do I start on your stories? There's quite a lot.
Yes there are, thanks. All of my FOLDERS IN the gallery are organized in linear order so just open any of them and start with the first one. Start with Year of Theft or Year of Fire- or just read the shorts. My stories are like comics, pick one up and you can start there.

Can I ask you to critique my cast/writing? I've heard you do that.
ABSOLUTELY I will do that for you. I am not gentle, but am only one man with one opinion. But I'm always happy to help.

Do you skype/discord/teamspeak?
I do. But you gotta level up our relationship to level 5 to get that stuff.

Do you have CHARACTER BIOS!?
I do click the website link to go to the LIVE BIO BIBLE, which I update when able. You can EVEN highlight stuff to ask questions, wouldn't that be fun?
Interests
Like a Greek statue, I am.

Updates

You know the rule, I updated the page I get to write a new journal full of words designed to convey information. I read somewhere once that some people think that's all we are, information. We're chunklets of random information floating in a meat-substrate and encased in calcium security to stop us from being hacked. That our perception of the world is entirely based on our limited ability to see beyond ourselves, that we might be two dimensional shapes that view our world as three dimensional as that's how we interpret the information of space around us.

People also say time is shaped like crystals though. So we're all mad as fucking badgers.

I love that about science, I couldn't learn it. I barely understood physics and chemistry was fun because they let me make jelly babies scream, lord the things a therapist will hear me say one day before they throw me in a fancy room. But I love how science sounds. I adore how it sounds. Science Fiction writing and indeed a lot of the weirder stuff I have happen in my stories is me reading about weird science and having characters act like my faulty understanding is perfectly sound. Let that be a lesson; mad science is just how science talks after a fourth of Jackie D and a handful of ambien. 

Wait there was supposed to be a point to all this- oh yes right, updates.

New Followers & Reading Order

I have no idea how or why but I've recently got about twenty new followers in the last month or so, that's pretty amazing considering all I do is write down words and leave comments all over the place that comprise of more words. So foremost thanks very much for taking the time to watch me scribble things onto a slate of information, it's made me quite happy that I can hopefully entertain you. As ever the biggest question I get is-

"What the fuck is wrong with your accent?" I'm Scottish. But the second most common is. "You've wrote a lot where do I start?" The best answer is anywhere you want. My gallery is sorted, not in the featured state but that thing is a whorish monster. Up the left side are the gallery folders the top 3 are the current "PRIME" story arc of my setting. The top story being the first "Year" followed by "year 2" and "Tsuchi" is where we currently are.

After that are folders that have no real canon order but are either fun side stories, crossovers or things that occur at a random interval on the timeline and so can be read in most any order you want. All of the sub folders and galleries are sorted in chronological order so you start with the first one and work right. I hope this helps some of you out and if you have questions or worries, please comment, I won't bite your head off. I'm not nearly as scary as the rumours will insist I am.

Tsuchigumo

With Redd part 3 we are now into part 8 of Tsuchigumo which means we still have a ways to go before we get out of this strange nest of clones and weirdness. For anyone keeping count we have a prologue and then the 3 current stories (Redd, Nathan and Felicity) each of which are 5 parts long. Then we have Louis which will be 5 parts long with a final epilogue to tie us all up. That means there's still plenty left to come but I hope people are enjoying it. 

I enjoyed writing up a lot of the cameos in the Redd section, it's nice to work with a lot of these characters. I do enjoy working with the vast majority of them but at the same time there was supposed to be a couple more that were pulled at the last moment, a shame but it happens. That said I'm not sure I'll open the doors quite this wide again for as much as I've loved getting to mess with a lot of these characters and using them creatively. There's been a few instances of hurt feelings. Despite me saying outright this would be a series in which people would look cool but be eventually hit in the face by a horrifyingly busted character, I've had a few people get annoyed their character was not given fifty blow jobs and made the start of the story. So yeah.

I've done what I can with these characters, I know they aren't mine and I appreciate being given the reigns with them. But when the character doesn't have much going on I'm not going to invent shit for people, I'm not going to "Ellis-ify" them and make them all flashy and new and amazing to keep people interested in them. I'm not gonna Moon Knight your D-stringers people, not without a lot of incentive.

So I might limit the intake next time I do some mass cameos like this or...REALLY...tell people what's going to happen. Like I thought I was super clear but apparently people read cameo and miss "getting punched in the face." written right after it.

The next part of Tsuchigumo will be Nathan Part 3- The Monster Stirs. In which Nathan is going to do awful things to several rocket-biker Yakuza Cyborgs and start to solve the mystery of boss Boso's missing child. Not to mention maybe Louis will finally show up!? He's been pretty absent in Nathan's parts, hasn't he?

I'm looking forward to getting to Nathan, he's a real fun guy to write. I also enjoy the style I use for him, the very casual tone punctuated by bizarre dips into his extra-sensory organs and his bizarrely indepth knowledge on strange stuff. Nathan is a lot of fun and I feel like I'll need to find more excuses to write him up front...but am aware the more I do that the less people will be afraid of him when he starts vomiting radiation at other characters.

Ah the struggle of making characters, you want people to fear them but also want people to know that LORD SLASHKILL is an avid stamp collector. 

Also this might be the last chance here- We're still looking for HERO characters to cameo in the Felicity side story. We're soon to have a big hero shindig adn we're looking for heroes great and small to show up at a party and do their level best to keep Louis Niccals from getting himself killed by the villains ALSO at this party. It's hard to be a hero when the guy you're trying to save finds danger to be his only reason to get out of bed.

Got a hero? Want in?

Leave their name in the comments. Tell us what they do. I Guarantee a few lines and them getting to hit someone in the face, maybe 2 someones!?

CRITIQUES

I think. I'm gonna start handing people waivers, you know? I get sick of saying this but I'm very bored being asked to give critiques and advice and criticism when clearly all people want is for me to tell them it's perfect or that I'm going to do it for them. Honestly the more people i get say "I LOVE THIS, THANKS FOR TELLING ME THINGS!" the more individuals slowly grow to hate me and want to have me shot by a group of well trained snipers that dress like birds.

I think I'm gonna get a waiver for people to sign, tell them they can't love it and then decide to hate it and start screeching. Also that they can't then start using the advice I gave them months later and act like they came up with it themselves.

Getting real sick of that one too.....

ANY lets wrap up with Commissions and Trades and a music video, yeah?

Commissions And Trades

Hey these are now open all the time- cause jobs and me are going through a rough period. 

When it comes to Art-Trades I work on the basics of I give as good as I get. If you ask for something I'll do it to the best I can and I expect that in return. I've written 20 page stories and gotten full colour drawings of characters in return and that's fine with me. If you want to do a trade or work on something approach me- I won't know what you want unless ya tell me homie. Also up for collaborative projects, those are fun.

TRADE SPOTS OPEN
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As for Commissions-

My rates have not changed. It's $5 per 500 words but you don't pay the inbetweens. I.e. 1590 words =$15 and 2450 words = $20
If you want a comic-Book/Radio Drama series from me it is $3 per page with a minimum of at least 5 pages per production

For my services you get a full draft, total viewing privileges AS I WRITE IT so you can critique it each step of the way, a full re-edit once a draft is complete and a personal copy of your own of course. Some of my commissioned work can be seen here  I'd show you scripted work but I can't until permission is granted from previous owners or the production comes out.

For an idea of rates ;

Ser Seregal (COM)The village was a writhing mass of darkness. When the demon had struck the town was not prepared, they were not ready and so all but the fastest runners and the surest of swords had fallen. The villagers pooled their wealth, made estimates on what was left in the village and then sent messages to the four corners for aid.
First came the mad and desperate, adventurers in ruined old leathers and so sure of their fated greatness. They fell like a house of cards in a tornado. Then came those who knew what they were doing, vetrans of a hundred dives into the dungeons dark. Heroes of places spoken of in legend. As one they admitted that they could not be paid enough to walk into that hellish place.
Hope seemed lost when the church simply advised they “Would pray for them”. The villagers watched as the darkness crawled and consumed their homes. Then he came.
He came with the dawn a mountain of a man decked out in armour that gleamed no matter the light. Villagers spoke in hushed w
 Ser Seregal my newest commission at 2981 words cost $25 
Of Suits and Snakes (COM)The jets of the jacuzzi let out a purr as Felicity sank into the tub. She let her arms braced over the sides as she just let herself go and relax. She deserved this, she’d earned this. Weeks of boring articles, subpar eateries and that whole clone debacle.
She’d earned a little five star pampering at the Montclam. If you were of the wealthy hotel hopping elite, The Montclam was the pearl of London. Top to bottom fixings and furnishings. A staff lovingly told to lick the boot and scrape the heel as much as possible.
This led to a lot of lovely food and a hotel suite twice the size of her own flat. Felicity was in heaven. She tugged on the strings of her Naheka-Brand Union Jack bikini. The weather never really allowed her to wear it, England has perhaps a DAY of sun every seven years. Besides there was another reason to wear it.
The door to the bathroom opened, that’s right private jacuzzi’s in the bathroom what a luxury. In walked one Kana Naheka in her own strik
 Cost $80 for 8291 words. 

I do long and I do short. So don't hesitate to hit me up- I even knock off some cash if I REALLY enjoy the project or you're a repeat customer

SLOTS
1- Long Form Story In Progress
2- Comic Commission X 3 In Progress
3- Short Form Story Negotiation

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Xeranad Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2017
Hello!

First off, I want to say it's a pleasure to meet you. I find the way you think both fascinating and enjoyable.

Second, thank you for your critique. I know I'm not the best writer in the world, but it makes me happy that you enjoyed the story.

Thirdly... um... well, I thought I had more to say.

Have a good day!
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dragonknight22 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2017  Student General Artist
Yo Mr-U, How ya doing?
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AAGGRESSS Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2017
*brofist*
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Artie-stico17 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey man.
How are you doing?
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dragonknight22 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2017  Student General Artist
Hey Mr-U, How are you, just thought i'd stop by and say hi.
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